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Answer #1:

Very good! Suggested changes in CAPS:

DURING the terminal season holidays Svenja travelled to the USA. She stayed in Florida FOR FOUR WEEKS! As a diminutive inform she brought a cookbook or kinda a cooking entrepot for me.
I am not the prizewinning cook: I´m healthy to make pancakes, noodles, scrambled eggs, hard-boiled foodstuff modify if they ARE questionable to be soft-boiled and some other cushy meals, however I ever enjoy cooking. So I was sure that the "taste of home" magazine would alter me a aggregation of fun and maybe it also would meliorate my "culinary art".

Well, today I poverty to introduce three recipes to you, which exhibit the multicolour and broad calorie cooking TYPICAL of the USA.

Answer #2:

During the last season holidays, Svenja traveled to the USA and stayed quaternary weeks in Florida! As a diminutive present she bought a reference or kinda a preparation magazine for me,
I am not the prizewinning cook; I´m able to attain pancakes, noodles, scrambled eggs, hard-boiled foodstuff modify if they were supposed to be soft-boiled and whatever another cushy meals, however, I ever savor cooking, I was trusty that the "taste of home" entrepot would alter me a lot of fun and maybe it would also improve my "culinary art".

but i'd change "culinary art" to "culinary skills"

Well, today I poverty to introduce threesome recipes to you, which show the motley and high calorie preparation of the USA.